tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5473819170664052953.post4100066343118921817..comments2018-12-08T19:35:48.240-05:00Comments on The Black Squirrel: Derby Girls - Part 2J. A. Platthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03579737369756389484noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5473819170664052953.post-91075856060602663522010-08-20T11:23:53.396-04:002010-08-20T11:23:53.396-04:00I am enjoying this tale too. The tension is there...I am enjoying this tale too. The tension is there, as are the characters. The little details, like "a smile that drew deep lines on his dry face" make it all seem more real. I am really curious as to what is going on in this world!<br /><br />Keep up the good work.Jonathan Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14841202262555830312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5473819170664052953.post-17833121738473531942010-08-20T07:17:54.771-04:002010-08-20T07:17:54.771-04:00I've been reading a lot of spy novels. This is...I've been reading a lot of spy novels. This is me trying my hand at a daring escape. I sort of wish there was a way to fit in a car chase too.<br /><br />Maybe in part 3.J. A. Platthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03579737369756389484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5473819170664052953.post-54166677554443101762010-08-20T06:25:36.244-04:002010-08-20T06:25:36.244-04:00Whoa that was tense. So, is Slaughter actually Ma...Whoa that was tense. So, is Slaughter actually Madame Secretary or is she just using Madame Secretary's fake ID? I am curious to know but I can hold off until another episode if there is one. This was great, and I like how she was mostly worried they would discover she had been skating. I know this is just the beginning but I like the direction you're going with this and I'm really looking forward to the third part and beyond, if there is to be more. Nice work on such an intense tale. I think I got a cramp from scrunching my muscles up in anticipation!alphabetehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17305229870777987796noreply@blogger.com