tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5473819170664052953.post2388739519075873494..comments2018-12-08T19:35:48.240-05:00Comments on The Black Squirrel: Derby Girls - Part 3J. A. Platthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03579737369756389484noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5473819170664052953.post-69121252628359905062010-09-08T21:45:34.602-04:002010-09-08T21:45:34.602-04:00Ah, thanks for pointing that out. This is what hap...Ah, thanks for pointing that out. This is what happens when your beta reader moves to Canada. Fixed now.J. A. Platthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03579737369756389484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5473819170664052953.post-15363364093452218792010-09-08T19:00:36.672-04:002010-09-08T19:00:36.672-04:00"I'd appreciate just getting the wet sock..."I'd appreciate just getting the wet socks off." <--the socks are already off, no? Maybe "I appreciate you just getting the wet socks off"? <br /><br />I really love Madame Secretary and the fact that she is a straight-up butt kicker. She is a compelling character and whatever she's involved in seems like she can handle it with aplomb. Looking forward to more...when the hiatus is over!alphabetehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17305229870777987796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5473819170664052953.post-30119358542428856792010-09-02T09:57:36.773-04:002010-09-02T09:57:36.773-04:00Damn you! *shakes fist* I finally caught up on th...Damn you! *shakes fist* I finally caught up on this and you're on hiatus?! I really enjoy your writing style. It's more art than writing. The imagery is intense but not overpowering. Commenting on all three parts here I have to say the worst part of the story is reading it in 1000 word chunks :) I like to sit down and read a whole book. Call me old fashioned.RalOberonhttp://www.lesmackenzie.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5473819170664052953.post-70290631878570334232010-08-31T08:47:39.105-04:002010-08-31T08:47:39.105-04:00I do believe this might be turning into a novel......I do believe this might be turning into a novel...Julie Saundershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10875644901496421952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5473819170664052953.post-60726550953050371652010-08-26T10:22:27.082-04:002010-08-26T10:22:27.082-04:00Good work, The breakout seemed very believable an...Good work, The breakout seemed very believable and while i do not know German, the way you used it made it understandable without me having to go google it.Jonathan Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14841202262555830312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5473819170664052953.post-12285278416431486812010-08-26T09:39:02.425-04:002010-08-26T09:39:02.425-04:00I don't know if I can claim Blade Runner witho...I don't know if I can claim <i>Blade Runner</i> without the Replicants, but I'm trying for a little urban dystopia. And maybe a speeder chase.J. A. Platthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03579737369756389484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5473819170664052953.post-47569826909448838052010-08-26T09:00:30.713-04:002010-08-26T09:00:30.713-04:00I want to know more about this world. This is grea...I want to know more about this world. This is great! Am I right that you're going for a Blade Runner vibe here?Monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09572451338701571550noreply@blogger.com